What? (No, Seriously. What?)

[jheti]

I. Um. Jade and Kitana: for the win at American Idol? Complete with the ever-popular viewpoint table-tennis that makes me wonder why more people don't just use third person all the time. My own inability to use it notwithstanding. Because I'm awesome. And also a hypocrite. I'm teh awesomest leet hypocrite EVAR.

NO U CAN'T HAS A TROPHY. Not for this mess.

I've spent too long in Mileena's narrative voice. She's just kind of spluttering with helpless rage and doing this--wavy-choppy-killing-thing--with her hands. But. Some of the adjectives. Nouns and adverbs. We're talking sleek tactile concepts. (I'm so humble. XD) Boy, do their outfits "cling nicely" a lot in this fic.

lt's a bit earnestly constructed to be trolling. Trying too hard. Also, the song is not Evanescence. Or maybe I'm just desperate for my subtext. Either one.

I can has subtext? They are such cute friends.

I don't know, though, about that. The world requires more furious!scary!Leena/Jade.



She still knew that she had to get it right, and she was trying with a raw enthusiasm born of panic. She couldn't breathe.

"...Harder." The word was half a gasp. "Harder."

Jade gagged, forcing down bile, and used her teeth.

I'm in ur MK, making them lesbians!!!1one. Eleventythree. Though, try as I might, no snarky in-text author's note presented itself.

And yes, that was calculated; the general consensus seems to be "ZOMG NEVER BITE DOWN. IT LIEK HURTS K." So it was perfect. Jade can pretend not to know any better, and Leena gets to smack her around some more. ^_^


Silly rabbit. Hand holding, and long walks, and most especially pretty gowns! Are for kids. XD


Oh! Also. Stolen from tygerlander.

Your Score: Mr. Bennet

You scored 54 Idealism, 41 Nonconformity, 58 Nerdiness

Are you on the list?Congratulations, you're Mr. Bennet! You are one mysterious person with mysterious motives. Despite all the mystery, it's clear that you believe what you do is for the greater good, and you are obviously a well-educated person in your field. Your best quality: Dedication to your work/organization/etc. Your worst quality: Keeping too many secrets

Link: The Heroes Personality Test written by freedomdegrees on OkCupid Free Online Dating, home of the The Dating Persona Test

SWEET. ^__________^

Do as I tell you. It's for your own damn good, and you might not want to mistake it for a suggestion.

*Halo polish. Or, in this case, glasses polish. For the win.*

Comments

[tygerlander.livejournal.com]

Makes me kinda glad places like ff.net are around. I don't know if I can handle fic like that nowadays

[evangeline21.livejournal.com]

I did actually try to read that fic-several times.

It's too jumbled, the author repeats discriptive actions (first in third person then in first person)

I'm all for descriptive narrative..but for some reason if I tried to read that further i think I would've gotten diabietes or something...

and that's just from what I've read ( couldn't finish the piece).