Dear Greed/Kimbley Fen (If I May)
Nov. 19th, 2007 05:57 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
jheti
Could we please stop with the "gold locked with amethyst" in reference to their eyes meeting?
I am not perfect. I did this too, years ago, with Neo and Smith. I know how tempting and irresistibly poetic it is and that it is compulsory.
All slash fen must do it at least once. It's like het fen and songfic.
But please. Once, and only once, is entirely enough. They could just put their arms around each other instead. Greed has grabby hands. This has potential.
And makes no reference, for good or ill, to their eye color at all. For which your audience will love you. Promise.
Sincerely,
Me
PS: It was still adorable, on the whole. <3
I am not perfect. I did this too, years ago, with Neo and Smith. I know how tempting and irresistibly poetic it is and that it is compulsory.
All slash fen must do it at least once. It's like het fen and songfic.
But please. Once, and only once, is entirely enough. They could just put their arms around each other instead. Greed has grabby hands. This has potential.
And makes no reference, for good or ill, to their eye color at all. For which your audience will love you. Promise.
Sincerely,
Me
PS: It was still adorable, on the whole. <3
