Fucking Troll (We Hates It, Yes)
May. 17th, 2008 03:56 pmIf you find any grammar errors, please, PLEASE NOTIFY ME!!!!111@
"Your whole life is one giant grammar error and I hate you" is probably not a valid notification.
Explicitly true, but altogether non-valid.
"Your whole life is one giant grammar error and I hate you" is probably not a valid notification.
Explicitly true, but altogether non-valid.
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Date: 2008-05-18 02:20 am (UTC)I actually didn't take the fic too seriously, it screamed more 'crack plot' to me..
will say this though: to author: typing 'what will happen' following the name of two characters, isn't a good way of creating a hook. Know why, because we all know what's going to happen. It's one of the most overly used 'questions' in fanfic summaries.
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Date: 2008-05-18 04:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-05-18 01:11 pm (UTC)I have no problem with the whole "my language =/= English" bit. I do apparently have issues with genderswitch, I'll grant her that much...But it still doesn't make random repeating clauses and "hee-hee bad English funneh!" (no, it isn't) and freaking repeating whole chunks of the videogame like it was your bright idea AT ALL OKAY. Because it's not.
Why. Why. Why can they not stay in the Inuyasha section of the Pit, where I can ignore them?
Of all the tiny, testosterone-laden, male-wish-fulfillment fandoms in the world, they had to walk into mine.
I suppose I can be grateful she hasn't tried her hand at Roy/Ed. XD